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Can someone help me word this invitation Better please?
You are invited to Rachel and Amanda’s Sweet 16!!! Woot Woot
For this occasion we will be renting two beach front hotels and go out for dinner.
This will be a formal dinner so do not forget to dress your best!!! 
THERE WILL BE 2 ADULT/PARENT CHAPERONS
Who? Rachel and Amanda of course
What? Sleep over/fancy dinner
Where? Quality Inn Suites Hotel
When? November 22, 2008 4:00pm
Why? Sweet 16 Baby!!!
What will you need? 30 dollars for dinner and an overnight bag
Do you need a ride? No problem!
* Please RSVP by November 12, 2008- my cell number is 555-555-5555 (leave a messages)
Don’t forget a present for both Rachel and Amanda
I think your invitation was already pretty good. Here are my edits:
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You are invited to Rachel and Amanda’s Sweet 16!!!
For this occasion we will be renting two beachfront hotels and go out for a formal dinner. Please dress your best.
There will be two adult/parent chaperons.
Who? Rachel and Amanda of course
What? Sleepover/fancy dinner
Where? Quality Inn Suites Hotel
When? November 22, 2008 4:00pm
Why? Sweet 16 Baby!!!
You need: 30 dollars for dinner and an overnight bag
Do you need a ride? No problem!
* Please RSVP by November 12, 2008- my cell number is 555-555-5555 (leave a messages)
Don’t forget a present for both Rachel and Amanda.
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-The smiley’s aren’t necessary and don’t really have a place on invitations. Also, no need for the extra exclamation points.
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